Chapter One
Jacket on the back of the chair. Check.
Desk light on. Check.
Now, Ms. Willems, your mission, should you choose to accept it: Get out of the office on the sly. Audrey snorted silently at her own badly-played movie line. She stuffed the Save the Children t-shirt she’d gotten from a Central Park Zoo benefit in her Tory Burch brown leather satchel, added as many legal pads as could fit, and plumped the bag to look like it held at least four case files. She casually leaned the bag against the side of her desk, in view of her open office door.
The excited chatter of the exiting assistants filled the hallway. She typed up the Popflicks engagement letter and then entered Popflicks as a new client into the law firm database. Yes. Her pulse quickened.
The office was now quiet. She put an uncapped red pen in the middle of a legal pad on her desk. It looked like she’d be right back. The scene called for something more. If only she had a permanently steaming cup of tea. She poured a bottle of water into a glass.
She should depart boldly, but leaving early was frowned upon by the partnership powers-that-be. They might even think she needed another assignment. She definitely did not. She had just landed Popflicks. She had stayed until 11 p.m. every night this week. Okay, so I’m not always very good at saying no. But now was not the time to say no to a partner—not when she’d been working so hard for seven years, her life on hold. Now that she was in the homestretch, she could practically see “Audrey Willemson, Partner,” embossed on her law firm’s business card.
Excerpt 2
She left the bathroom, and at the door to the garden, she ran into Jake. He put his arm around her. The warmth of the physical contact surprised her. He smelled like fresh cotton laundry with a slight whiff of beer. He leaned in, one hand on the door next to her, her back against the sliding glass door. She held his gaze, her body buzzing. Enveloped in their own little bubble, the party noise receded into the background. It was just him and her.
“So, surprise, surprise, a woman actually asked me where the bathroom was,” he said in a low voice.
“And you wanted to share that with me?”
“I thought you might have had something to do with that.”
“Did you?”
“Yes.” He laughed. “You totally did. You’re so not good at keeping secrets.”
She laughed. “Maybe. I might’ve.”
“Are you sure you’re a corporate lawyer?”
“Positive. Why?”
“You seem too mischievous.” He brushed a strand of hair away from her face. His touch left a warm tingle. Her brain blanked.
Excerpt 3
Water bugs were at the top of the short list of things she hated about summer in New York. She grabbed the vacuum cleaner and rubber gloves from the closet. She pulled her socks up over her work pants so the bug couldn’t crawl up her legs. She pulled her hair into a ponytail and wrapped a scarf around her hair. She didn’t want it flying into her hair. She pulled on the rubber gloves. [skipped section]
She carried the vacuum cleaner across the bedroom to the sliding door and put it down. She wanted her weapon at hand should the bug escape into the bedroom. She went outside into her garden and peeked over the fence. The light was on. Jake was up. She slipped through the hole in the fence and, with the dim light peeking through the curtained windows, carefully followed the path to his sliding door. She banged loudly on the glass. Biscuit barked.
Jake, pulling back the curtain and opening the sliding door, looked shocked. Jake was bare-chested. All hard muscle. She flushed.
“Wow, is this like a 1960s cleaning visit fantasy?” he asked. “Not that I ever had that dream, but you know, I do like the James Bonds from that period—especially the headscarves. I’m not sure about the socks over the pants though.”
“Very funny. A giant water bug has invaded my bathroom, and I need you to kill it.”
“You look pretty equipped to do the job yourself.”
“Yes, well it’s up in a corner I can’t reach.”
“Okay. But I’m not particularly fond of them myself.”
“It’s tough being a boy,” she said.
“I thought you were one of those women who could do it all.”
“No one can do it all. And I especially can’t do water bugs.”
He grabbed his t-shirt from the couch and pulled it on. He started to put on his sandals and stopped. “Do I need to add the socks?”
“I’d recommend it unless you don’t mind if it crawls on your foot. You might want to put on long pants as well.”
“Too hot. But I’ll add the socks in case I try to step on it. I’d better get a heavy shoe as well. C’mon, Biscuit, we’re going to battle a bug.”
They walked back through the two gardens in the warm night air. Audrey opened the sliding door and picked up the vacuum cleaner, slinging the hose over her shoulder.
He said, “You know, it’s the vacuum cleaner slung over your shoulder that really adds that flair.”
“You’re just jealous because you’ve only got a shoe.”
I’ve always wanted to be a writer.
But after college, I worked in New York City government, for a New York City Council Member, helping constituents, and then I went to law school and became a lawyer. I worked for a large NY law firm. One of the reasons I became a litigator was because I liked writing briefs.
After I watched a really bad romantic comedy one night, I thought I could write a better one. And so, I started writing one at night. I then took a lot of writing courses. My first writing course was the Penguin Writer’s Academy “Constructing a Novel” course, and my teacher said the exchange between Audrey and Eve (two characters in Partner Pursuit) was “sparky.” That made my month. I realized I could actually write commercial fiction—and not just legal briefs and compliance policies.
What is something unique/quirky about you?
I like to create dollhouse miniatures and set up scenes in my dollhouses.
Where were you born/where did you grow up?
I am a born and bred New Yorker.
How do you find time to write as a parent?
I let my children use their computers. I do have some guilt about that. I also set up play dates. And I try to find them books to read. That’s the best. It’s guilt-free for me, and they can be totally absorbed for about 5 hours. I should probably thank Rick Riordan in my acknowledgements for occupying my children and giving me time to write.
What do you do to unwind and relax?
I hang out with my family, talk to friends, read, listen to music, or watch movies or TV. I am also trying to work out more; I have a stationary bike and I watch Korean dramas or other TV shows, and if it ends on a cliffhanger, that’s usually enough incentive to get back on the bike the next day. I sometimes make miniatures. During the summer, I go to the beach and go swimming in the ocean. If I really need to relax, I take a bath with bath bombs.
Do you have a favorite movie?
HOW TO LOSE A GUY IN 10 DAYS is one of my favorite movies.
Here are some of my other favorite romantic comedies: https://kathystrobos.com/favorite-romantic-comedies/
Which of your novels can you imagine made in a movie?
This novel, Partner Pursuit. I’m writing my third novel now, and I could imagine that as a movie.
As a writer, what would you choose as your mascot/spirit animal?
I’m afraid, as a writer, my spirit animal would be Cookie Monster. But I’m trying to eat less cookies and M&Ms as I write.
What inspired you to write this book?
I found it very hard to have any work/life balance when I was a lawyer at a law firm, so that inspired this in part. But I did make a lot of great friends at the office, so I also wanted to convey those friendships.
Can you tell us a little bit about the characters in Partner Pursuit?
Audrey is a workaholic lawyer. She is trying to make partner—with only six months until the decision. She’s torn because she’s stressed by working so much, but she also loves being a lawyer and the analytical thrills. And then she meets Jake.
Jake is a fun-loving music marketing executive. He definitely doesn’t want to date a workaholic lawyer—because his dad was one, and his dad often put work before family. I made him a music marketing executive because when I became in-house counsel, I worked for the parent company of a music company, among other things. When I would ride up in the elevator in the morning, other people would talk about how they’d been late the night before at a concert. I thought, “wow, that’s so different than my life writing a brief or compliance policy until late at night.”
How did you come up with the title of the book?
Finding a title was hard. I put down all the various concepts on a huge piece of paper, and I played around with them. I had so many different titles. I liked Partner Pursuit because she’s trying to become a partner at her firm and find a life partner. And I liked the alliteration.
At one writers’ conference, they said they didn’t like the title Partner Pursuit, so my son (I think he was 7) suggested “Only One”—because only one person making partner and she thought Jake was “the one.” I liked that too. But then, they said it should be “The Only One,” so for a while it was called “The Only One.” But in the end, I liked Partner Pursuit better.
What did you enjoy most about writing this book?
When I write a good scene, I get a really happy feeling. I love writing banter like when she’s chatting with her friends about whether Jake likes her.
I was walking outside on Columbus Avenue when I thought of the opening scene of her trying to get out of work but make her office look like she’s still there. And I was really happy that I finally thought of a good opening scene. I think I rewrote the opening scene around ten times.
I was also really happy when I thought of the scene where she and Jake are battle the water bug. I had a romantic date with my now-husband when we first started dating; we were eating dinner, by my balcony in my apartment, and all of a sudden, there was a flying water bug! I’d never even seen one fly before. We got out the vacuum cleaner and were trying to vacuum it up. We couldn’t find it, and then my husband saw its antennas peeking out from a shelf on the bookcase.
I also enjoyed sharing my love for New York City.
Convince us why you think your book is a must read:
It has opposites attract, friends to lovers, witty banter, a real sense of what it’s like to live in New York City, an engaging cast of characters, a rollercoaster plot, and a heartwarming romance. It also provides examples of how to ally with colleagues to succeed at work.
Have you written any other books that are not published?
I’ve written two more books that I hope to publish over the coming year: Is This For Real? and Caper Crush.
Who designed your book covers?
Cover Ever After. I love my covers! She is an amazing cover designer.
Do you have any advice to offer for new authors?
Take writing classes. I have learned so much from writing classes, and it helps to add all these tools to your writing toolbox so that you can fall back on them when you’re stuck.
I highly recommend Linnea Sinclair’s classes (new classes posted here: https://www.facebook.com/profile.php?id=100063591436317).
Also, classes are great for meeting other writers and finding critique partners. Chatting to other writers is so helpful and inspiring! And my critique partners have been amazing in pointing out where I need to raise the stakes or add more tension.
I also recommend joining writers’ associations like the WFWA and the RNA. There are also so many great writers’ and readers’ groups on Facebook.
Read in your genre.
There are also so many writing books I recommend, but here are a few:
Writing the Romantic Comedy by Billy Mernit (this is a fun book to read about romantic comedies—even if you’re not writing one)
Story Genius by Lisa Cron
The Emotional Craft of Fiction by Donald Maas
Save the Cat by Blake Snyder
Scene and Structure by Jack Bickham
Techniques of the Selling Writer by Dwight Swain
Also, I found entering RWA-related contests helpful. The feedback is very useful. Placing also felt like a validation of my writing. Partner Pursuit placed in two contests:
• Winner of the Hudson Valley RWA’s 2020 25-4-25 Contest (Romance)
• Third Place in the 2019 RWA Orange Rose Contest for Women’s Fiction with Romance as a Central Element under its former title, The Only One.
Do you prefer to write in silence or with noise?
I prefer to write while listening to music. I have various Spotify writing playlists.
Do you read yourself and if so, what is your favorite genre?
I love reading romantic comedy. My favorite author is Sophie Kinsella. She makes me laugh out loud. But I also read women’s fiction.
Do all the characters come to you at the same time or do some of them come to you as you write?
They don’t all come to me at the same time. Some appear as I write. I also sometimes have to sit down and interview a specific character to really get a feel for them.
Pen or Typewriter or Computer?
Mostly I write on my computer, but I also sometimes write scenes by pen. And when I am revising, I print out the pages and revise with a pen.
Do you write one book at a time or do you have several going at a time?
I write one book at a time, but if a plot idea comes to me for another book, I write that down. This year, I was taking a Gotham screenwriting class and we had to write an outline for the class, so I was working on that outline for a different book/possible screenplay while writing my third book Caper Crush.
What is your writing process?
I started out as a pantser, and I’m still mostly a pantser, but I recently tried this eight-sequence outlining process I learned in the Gotham screenwriting class, so maybe I will try that for future books. We’ll see how it works once I try to write that book. 😊
After I write my first really rough draft, I find that a lot more scenes and conversations come to me, and I weave those in. That’s one of my favorite parts, when things start clicking into place. I also create an outline as I write so I can see the character arc and the stakes.
How long on average does it take you to write a book?
I think it takes me a year to eighteen months. I wish I could write faster, but I am getting faster. It took me about six months to write the first very rough draft of my third novel. And then I print it out and read it over and write another draft, adding more scenes and description. After a few rounds of that, it goes to editors and critique partners. That takes awhile too. But it’s also good to have that time away from my MS.
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ReplyDeleteI enjoyed reading the excerpt and the guest post, Kathy and I can't wait to find out if Audrey figures out to best the musical chairs! Thanks for bringing your book to my attention and have a magical holiday season!
ReplyDeleteThank you for posting about this book, it sounds like such a fun read
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